Thursday, December 23, 2010

A new story ;)

Here is a warning before you start reading it further. This post is really very lenghty and huge.! Longest of all i have ever posted.! If you have patience you can read it. And its a love story. Complete love story. So spare me if you'r not a love bug..!

And I dedicate this post to only person who wanted me to write this.! I hope that person enjoys it as much while reading it.


Gloomier day with even gloomier people around”, she thought scanning the crowd wondering what’s with them as they all looking at her. Irritated she sat down under the tree and opened her copy of “Particle Chemistry” and began reading it. Just then, he came and sat beside her.

Hey Anne, what’s with you?” he asked her as if he exactly knew what was troubling her. She was expecting him to come there. May be a little latter but he was quick enough to find her. Sighing, almost to herself she said: “Uh huh, Luke. Nothing at all.”, She replied back not looking at him. Not looking at him while she spoke made it very clear that she was lying.

“Spill the beans baby, you aren’t smart enough to lie to me” he said with a twinkle in his eye. He leaned forward and took her hand in his and kissed her fingers one by one. He knew it was one such a habit that thrilled her always. She leaned back and rested her head on his shoulder to comfort herself. “Stay with me always, will you?”, she asked him helplessly staring at his hazel eyes which looked back at her with the same intensity as it did the first time they met.

Pulling her rather more close to himself, he played with her fingers. “Not a chance honey, I want you all for myself”, saying this he drew himself close enough that he could now feel her breath on his chest. Bending down, he kissed her enough till it lingered his lips. Then looking back at those beautiful eyes he almost got lost in them.

“Luke? We’re be late for the ball if you keep staring at me this way” she said almost laughing bringing him back to his senses.

“I’ll be waiting in the dorm for you, Anne.” He said with a smug in his face that said almost everything.

“You seem to take every damn advantage of we being the prefects, Luke. We share a common room together and you know every one envy’s us, don’t you.?” She spoke ruffling his hair.

“I do. And let them be. It doesn’t bother me. You please get dressed fast, I can’t wait to see you in the gown” he said pulling her off her feet so she could face him. They held their hands together and walked past everyone through the dorm to the common room they own being prefects.

The common room the prefect's owned, had two doors on the either side, with their names engraved on the doors. With a huge bookshelf that stood right in the centre, and there stood a chimney where they could warm themselves from the bitter cold. Luke, being a guy he got a room which was painted blue. In the centre sat a huge circular bed which had a black linin over it. On the dark Persian blue wall, stood a huge guitar that personified his personality. While on the other side, Anne’s room was painted purple that reflected her purity and feminine nature. Her rectangular bed had the same similar purple bed spread. Her room was rather decorated with a number of her own paintings she ever drew in her time time.

“Anne? How long will it take.?”, asked Luke maybe for the hundredth time that evening.

“Uh Luke, I may get a little more late. Don’t mind please go check the arrangements till then” she replied back from the closed door that read “Anneliese”.

“Anne, the ball’s gonna begin in half an hour. Please make it fast dear. I’ll be waiting for you in the hall”. Having said this he left the common room.

Still not satisfied with the dress she wore, she began to dig her shelf for another dress that could please her this evening. After digging the whole shelf into the bed, she found it. A black plain off-shoulder gown that exactly showed off her sexy figure. She wore a little make up and pulled her hair into a bun leaving a little strands of hair fall on her face. Finally, pleased with herself she walked outta the room.

After getting outta the common room, she found every guy starting at her. There was nothing to doubt that, she looked at most sexy and even she knew it. All she wanted to see was Luke’s reaction seeing her. And to just know that, she walked past everyone towards the great hall. Even though she was walking, her eyes were eagerly searching for the only one she ever loved.

Petrified by her beauty and elegance, he stood there staring into her brown eyes. “You..You..You look BE-AU-TI-FUL he blurted out.

She smiled at him. Walked towards him, and took him by her hand. “common, my prince. Everyone’s waiting for us.” She whispered .

“ Not so early, my dear. Not until I get the price for having being so patient” he teased her moving his hands up and down her arm. Leaning forward he surprised her planting a playful kiss on her lip.

“What was that for?” she asked equally surprised taking in his aroma.

“ That- was for me, price for being so patient”. Having said that he slipped in her arm into his and lead her through the crowd.

They were the first to start the ball that night. He moved her in small circles moving his fingers playfully into her curls. “Anne, I never wanna stay without you.” He said looking into her eyes which reflected nothing but truth. She said nothing but just held him more closer to her and rested her head on his chest. They danced all night, holding the other. They were in the ball room till late midnight. Tired, they moved to their common room. To protect themselves from the freezing cold, Luke burnt a few logs in the fireplace and they sat there holding the other’s hands sharing the warmth.

She was sparkling golden because of the flames that kept the room warm. And she looked even more beautiful here he realized. He kept staring at her for a long time trying to absorb in everything. He leaned forward and brought her into a slow, deep kiss which grew into a hot, hungry kiss. They kissed till they struggled hard to breathe. Taking in air he again kissed her, but this time a slow and lingering kiss. He freed her hair off the bun letting it fall down her shoulder. He dug in fingers deep inside her hair and looked directly into her and spoke.

“Anne, I wanna make love to you” he whispered into her ear which brought in a million emotions. She held him close and whispered, “ No one’s stopping you my dear prince”.

“ No backing off my dear, not at all” he teased and he began kissing her eyes and check. He kissed her along her throat and when she moaned he glued his lips on to hers once again. She began undoing his button and threw it on the floor beside. She touched his bare chest with her palm and enjoyed his masculine presence. He scooped her in his arms and took her into his room. He brushed her arms slowly marvelling at how soft her skin felt. He cupped her face in his hands, kissed her deep. “I love you, Anne” he whispered and drove into her as she groaned with pleasure. She kept murmuring his name as she rested her head over his chest. She felt good. May be more than just good. She felt awesome being his, his completely. Tried and exhausted both fell asleep holding each other. As the morning sun came into the room, he got up to realize she was still asleep. He felt good seeing her asleep. He always slipped into her room early in the morning to see her sleep, but today it was something different. Today she was asleep on his bed, right beside him. And it somehow made him feel awesome. “I’ll do anything to just see you see you beside me when I am awake every moring, and its a promise my dear princess” he muttered to himself kissing her forehead.

As she woke up, she caught him looking at her. Seeing his shove this much love she felt satisfied. “ He is so perfect” she thought. “ Completely perfect and completely mine” leaning forward, she looked into those mesmerizing eyes of his. “I Love you, Luke” she said and he held her in his arms pleased with himself.

4 comments:

  1. Amazing, I must say.
    This is better than any Nora Robert's novel I've ever read.
    Simple, pure and passionate :)
    Keep up the good work :)

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  2. Thankyou somi.!
    It does mean a lot to me.. :)

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  3. @pavvi: thanks a million honey..! :)

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